Thursday, 5 July 2007 - 4:09 PM PDT

Personally I enjoy lemmons when they're part of the fic and not viceversa. But when you see likw three lines of plot, that generally has nothing to do with the actuall personality of the characters you're reading about and nothing to justify the sudden atittude adjustement (like being hit on the head, the ingestion of a strange but very powerful substance, being the evil twin impersonating..., being brainwashed) is just boring; and in most of this cases there's a violation of at least two of the rules for lemmon writers you just posted.

Thursday, 5 July 2007 - 11:39 PM PDT

"But when you see likw three lines of plot, that generally has nothing to do with the actuall personality of the characters you're reading about and nothing to justify the sudden atittude adjustement (like being hit on the head, the ingestion of a strange but very powerful substance, being the evil twin impersonating..., being brainwashed) is just boring; and in most of this cases there's a violation of at least two of the rules for lemmon writers you just posted." 

That's exactly what I'm talking about! I read one once, that took place when Nephrite came to Naru's room (that scene before he dies) and it starts with "Gee it's hot in here, I think I'll take my shirt off." And then, Nephrite's, um, "parts" would have had to be about 6 inches above his bellybutton for him and Naru to do what they were doing... Thus the rule about one partner being a foot shorter than the other, and some things not being physically possible.